
Thing to be improved on: From our audience feedback we have learnt that our choice of music could have been better. Many of the comments we receieved suggested that the music was more suited to the 'action' film genre. In some of the settings throughout the trailer were said to be too light and would have been better to have less light and a darker environment. The scene with the protagonist running away from the building many have suggested to be too much.
Overall, I think the effort of finding a good location was well worth it, as we got most of our positive comments came from our location. Although some people had suggested that some of the outside settings could have been darkened, mostly people seemed impressed by the darkness and lighting in the other shots, such as the spotlighting and candle light. Considering mise-en-scene, most comments were good on this topic, although some said that the ouiji board scene could be improved as they did not know what they were meant to read, or whether the actions were supposed to be meaningful in any way. On the topic of soundtrack, the frequency on improvable comments about this were high. Although the audience agreed the 'booms' worked well with the clips the main soundrack they believe to be better suited in an action film.
Although considering the feedback, our group had decided to keep some elements the same as we believed they worked well with what we were trying to achieve and also brought the feeling of a horror film. I believe we edited our trailer well and the location and also our choice of shots and montages worked well. If we had the chance to start again we have agreed we would have liked to shoot more gore and torture to make the trailer seem more realistic.
Fair points but not presented in an internet-user friendly way. Think about how you could improve this aspect. Also explain who your TA was and how you gathered your feedback. Finally try to consider the feedback from two perspectives - the product as horror, and the product as a trailer.
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